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No Justice, No Deliverance by ~Kitomi06:iconKitomi06:



Pain and sorrow enveloped my full being
From observing these pained lands, seeing
Tears falling on their worthy eyes
Remembering that time someone died
Perished, vanished in this world
I remember that day and that girl

From this day onward i felt like
Being torn apart, tortured by my time
Everywhere I go, I feel, I see
People who walk not freely
What exactly happened my lad?
What have you done to our motherland?

Rain falls on the roofs of houses
On the corner a child touches
A glass window clear of crystal and light
Then the people suddenly shouted inside
They neglected that young girl
Whose skin is pure white as a pearl

And then i heard thunder roar
I looked up, the rain automatically poured
Blood red at every corner, I saw a child from afar
She searched for a place, a sanctuary, an altar
I want to go and give her some help
But i couldn't because I can't, I felt
And realized it's hard to take care of yourself
I'm doubting but wanting to save her and give help

Then from my motherland I saw
At a twenty foot distance from my stall
I rather not go near the distance
When I noticed all those corpses
A tear fell down my cheek, I strided forth
I can't help but to return to my home

But then I was greeted with burnt, perished, vanquished birth land
I'm regretting the sin that I started, I feel damned
What exactly happened my lad, what have we done to our motherland?
©2009 ~Kitomi06
:iconkitomi06:

Author's Comments

well i got inspired somehow before i took the poster making contest in our school...haha so here :D

hope you likey ;D

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:iconmootecky:
Submit this to crusader!! I love it <3
Even if its so sad D;

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Arashi~For dream~
:iconkitomi06:
hahaha XDD okay wish ko lang accept nila XDDDD

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"Don't be afraid to do or say the right thing" - Dr. Jose P. Rizal :salute:

"If the world turned it's back on you and you don't have anyone to support you...be yourself, stand up and do your best" - Me :D
:iconkitomi06:
at oo nga pala thank you sa comment :glomp:
:iconiloveyouplz:

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"Don't be afraid to do or say the right thing" - Dr. Jose P. Rizal :salute:

"If the world turned it's back on you and you don't have anyone to support you...be yourself, stand up and do your best" - Me :D
:iconmootecky:
sure~ why wouldn't i?~ -w-

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Arashi~For dream~
:iconmootecky:
wish ko ren xD

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Arashi~For dream~
:iconkitomi06:
:manalangin tayo~: lol

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"Don't be afraid to do or say the right thing" - Dr. Jose P. Rizal :salute:

"If the world turned it's back on you and you don't have anyone to support you...be yourself, stand up and do your best" - Me :D
:iconkitomi06:
taeng theme yan sa school gusto ko sana tong ipass D8 bwiset TT_TT

--
"Don't be afraid to do or say the right thing" - Dr. Jose P. Rizal :salute:

"If the world turned it's back on you and you don't have anyone to support you...be yourself, stand up and do your best" - Me :D
:iconmootecky:
ok lang yaan~

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Arashi~For dream~
:iconkitomi06:
>.<

--
"Don't be afraid to do or say the right thing" - Dr. Jose P. Rizal :salute:

"If the world turned it's back on you and you don't have anyone to support you...be yourself, stand up and do your best" - Me :D

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